Creative Delusion

Creative Delusion

Autosomodization ~ Salvador Dali

Rip from me this betrayer
Torturer of souls, slayer of dreams
Harbinger of misunderstanding
Fueled by lack of poetic decency

Nerves grating against the madness
Tendrils dripping red, fragments of forgotten hearts
Ribboned against the sanity
That they claim is not mine to know

Bleeding delusion and imagination
As sand melts into nothingness
And times surely erases its vibrancy
Smothered against the gilded clouds

Wishbone delusions shall topple
This pedestal of marble, this testament of strength
And it will one day surely bleed
Such as you've made me

Mutilation, desolation
Amongst shadowed appendages
Wrapped in gossamer shroud
A mockery against the freedom I claim to own

Yet...

Immortal I will always be
Flying in the face of those who dare to look away
Champion for those who dare to dream
Who speak their secrets, and know no shame.

To the artist ~ create
To the poet ~ love
To the writer ~ leap
To the dreamer ~ live

~Natasha Head~



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Anonymous said…
Well Tash I am honoured to be the first to say hi on your one shot. So much truth in this poem, the only thing I have to leave so far is all those little words I've written down. Make every one count x
signed...bkm said…
Oh what a Brillant write of emotion and creativity Natasha...and the Dali to accompany such a piece...I am glad you dared to dream here to love and to write...Bravo!!...bkm
Anonymous said…
To be creative is many things...and it is an emotionally charged outpouring for it you offer us here, a piece that puts a smile on one's face to think that they too might be part of a community that feels at such. Powerful ending notes...a little something for everyone, and a potent message: embrace it. Well done.
Brian Miller said…
this is like a battle cry for those that dare to step to the edge of creation and dip their pen or brush...vivid and intense...loved it!
Anonymous said…
To the artist ~ create
To the poet ~ love
To the writer ~ leap
To the dreamer ~ live


what a wonderful exhortation following a masterful, emotional poem. Such passion and creative liberty are so needed and so welcome. thanks for sharing this!
Sonika Uppal said…
umm...okay...so i need to create , leap, love and dream...

beautifully passionately intense....
Anonymous said…
This reads to me as part anthem, part battle cry, part challenge to self and world for the poet to break through and that break in turn redefine the poet, an evolutionary/revolutionary challenge against those elements that deny same, or even deny it's possible. There is pain in these words, my friend, which makes me sad to read them, but through that pain there is strength and a hope, there is a will to grow and defy the slayer of dreams and whomever/whatever set those wishbone delusions. (cont'd)
Wow you went full out on this one
Job very well done
Only thing wrong at all here
Is Brian beat me with the cheer
Pain in the words?
Maybe you need to play with the birds?
Oh I'll just be a pain in the ass
That way you dark have to go all dark lass
While back to work ruining my fun
Once again job well done!
Damn I tried to sneak this in and in my haste
Mixed up dark with won't at least I didn't copy and paste
Can't ever accuse me of that
Cya from the Cat
Bubba said…
Wow-wow-wow! This is AWESOME, Natasha!

Great language, vivid images! Excellent!
Anonymous said…
Potent poem. Hadn't seen this particular Dali painting before.
Dear Natasha

Perfectly captured the creative delusion with the fervor that grips the creator to take common / uncommon things and turn into something totally different totally new even if its harsh, delusional or a dream. I liked it .. thanks for sharing..

ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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dustus said…
"Champion for those who dare to dream
Who speak their secrets, and know no shame."

Such a powerful poem; those lines especially. Food for thought, perhaps end it at the above part.... This is an excellent poem, Natasha.
Reggie said…
Very emotional read Natasha...this seemed to have come from the depths....the image is awesome.
It feels as if an angel tries to fly away...

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Anonymous said…
Just re-read this and I haven't forgotten how bloody brilliant it is!
Louise said…
oh yes!! How did I miss this??! Brilliant write Tash...and powerful indeed! Love, love love the last stanza..To the artist ~ create
To the poet ~ love
To the writer ~ leap
To the dreamer ~ live ..I agree with Shan, bloody brilliant! x
dreamsteve said…
I love your work Natasha..you write into my soul..."Immortal I will always be
Flying in the face of those who dare to look away
Champion for those who dare to dream
Who speak their secrets, and know no shame" Make me proud to know you..
This is so powerful and a massive FU to the people who criticise free expression and thought. Flying in the face of those who dare to look away- too right. This made me proud to be a writer- even if I'm just a beginner
Susie Clevenger said…
Wow!! I agree with Stuart. There are many who wish to stifle creativity by censoring. You gave it to them with this piece!
poetjanstie said…
Absolutely magnificent! A glorious explosion of poetry, Natasha! Lots of meanings and one to me that beckons the fall of dogmatic and repressive tyranny...
Lázaro Rojas said…
create. love. leap. live. :-)
lucychili said…
brutal, terrifying, strong, hopeful?
Chris Lawrence said…
You know how to make an entrance this is an impressive piece

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