The Village
The Village
Through shanty's and unkempt vessels
Seasoned now to lack of use
Grey and weathered
With no shine lift to shimmer
Just the glimpse of a forgotten name
In the haze of a midsummer afternoon
Once worthy, now forgotten
Save for a few dusty shelves
Holding her post cards in once prosperous drug stores
Not that long ago
They would celebrate
And feast upon her return.
Traps...like so many forgotten ghosts
Decorate the homestead's of men who were once called captain
Now painted in colours
Gaudy and overstated
Like men who would woo Shakespeare
On a stage where the feminine would be mocked.
Now reserved for photo ops
In seasonal gift shops
Lawn ornaments
For those who have left for greener seas
Of currency and neon lights.
But Mum and Pop remain
Tending to gardens of granite
From rocking chairs on unsteady verandas
Overlooking the blue
They chose to hang their hat on.
Comments
Now that deserves a frown...lol
But the words were spot on
As old thoughts once again dawn
Oh yeah..we are gettin' it all down with the blogs..advise?
hang " low".
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"Like men who would woo Shakespeare
On a stage where the feminine would be mocked" That's shrewd, and shows you know your stage history...and after all, you're talking about a kind of stage, or tableau, here.
"Lawn ornaments
For those who have left for greener seas
Of currency and neon lights" Greener seas. That's sharp enough, but adding the rest makes it even better, imho.
Tending gardens of granite? Get out. And the last two lines are perfect, and original. it makes the "blue" sound utilitarian and trivial, somehow.
It's official. I hate you, lol.
Lib ~
MMMagical MMidsummer wishes Tash xx