Change ~Poetics~dVersePoets

If there is one thing I think this we can all agree on, it's the simple fact our world needs changing.  Sheila Moore has chosen CHANGE as the theme for this weeks prompt at Poetics.  Because the grind kept me busy this week, I missed FormForAll, where Beth Winter brought us the form of staccato.  So, in an effort to one up the grind...I am combining two dVerse offerings here today.  The form and the prompt.

Pitch Your Tents

Amongst the power of corporations
Mankind has cowered throughout their nations
Trading souls as dollars well spent
The working poor picks up their tents
While the bulls line their pockets with dollars green
Don't think this is what capitalists mean

Amongst the three piece suites that own Wall Street
It is the working poors' boots that stomp concrete
People United Will Never
People United Won't Ever
Be defeated if they stand tall as ONE
Be tricked again by butter or by gun

We've let them run the world for far too long
As we've stood with fists curled, praying their wrong
But our freedoms have taken flight
With corporate sponsor into night
The time is upon us to Occupy
Or morals, values, trust, will all soon die




Comments

Brian Miller said…
a double dverse...that might score you extra points in diving...though it might hurt...smiles...love the strength and conviction in your voice to stand together and united in the face of corporate greed and corruption...oh i stand as well...unless we sit and i will sit in...the play in the second verse from three piece suit to working mans boots is awesome...two of my fav lines in this...so hope you ahve a lovely saturday ma'am...
Claudia said…
from wall street to concret...tricked by butter or gun..made me think of a movie where a boxer risked his life just to be able to feed his family..strong words today and wow...staccato and poetics prompt in one...kudos tash
Anonymous said…
...under one nation seems empty... you speak of important stuff
lynne said…
If we don't follow through what we have started with in the "Occupy protests" we may as well lay in the ditch and keep our heads down..

indeed, the times they are a changing.. preach it sistah!!
Anonymous said…
I love tricked by butter and gun. I live right by Wall Street (occupy it all the time--ha!) Though not in three-piece suit or tent. But your poem has great energy and spirit, and love the Dylan. Thanks. K.
Scarlet said…
like your strong and brave voice...your ending lines are my favorite lines:

The time is upon us to Occupy
Or morals, values, trust, will all soon die
Anonymous said…
very powerful commentary on OWS
Janie Junebug said…
Such an excellent poem Natasha. Mr. Fox recommended you, and I value his opinion highly. I shall follow you, and I hope you follow me.

Love,
Lola
The Silver Fox said…
I almost wrote a post a few months ago predicting that people would unite against the money people who really run things, and not the political parties who claim to run things. I pessimistically assumed it would not be peaceful... then Occupy Wall Street began and I thought "Maybe we can avoid violence." Now the protesters are being banned and arrested, and I think "This only proves their point!" and worry that it may turn violent after all as the people fight back.

"The Times, They Are a'Changin' " indeed.
Nodding along every line here :)
This is some powerful poetry.
...and I pray the times really are a changing too :)
Pat Hatt said…
Rhyming in such a strong voice
Very nice change choice
Still say the tents are crap
And need to hit them where it hurts for change to ever fill the gap
But a wonderful verse
Surely the stuck up rich wants to make us all curse
Laurie Kolp said…
Strong and powerful. I'm for change, but not a revolution.
hedgewitch said…
Great combination of prompts, Tash. (that form beat my butt.) I couldn't agree with you more, either.
Steve King said…
Well said. It's been a long time since leaders have listened to the voices of those whom they serve. The times, though they are indeed a-changin' don't feel quite like the '60s yet, but it's gettin'there.
ayala said…
Strong and powerful! Great write.
Rocking, like a song. Love that you included the Dylan clip. I think, in the dark ages of the 70's, I used to play that song down at the local jail where my extended family was behind bars for first time possession of pot. xxxj
Unknown said…
Nice combination Tash. Change is a powerful subject and can be drawn in so many ways, love how you presented it here. Thanks
The Noiseless said…
what a strong take on change.
eloquent and powerful details,
well done.
As we've stood with fists curled, praying their wrong
But our freedoms have taken flight
With corporate sponsor into night
The time is upon us to Occupy
Or morals, values, trust, will all soon die



love the way your words make impact, well done.
kaykuala said…
You combined the prompts so well Natasha! Dyland in his young days. He is special!

Hank
Sheila said…
loving the strength and conviction in your writing voice these days. bravo on the 2for1, also ;)

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