Border Patrol ~ Poetics
Who decides who stays and who goes? |
Manipulated… we waste our days doing as we are instructed.
Trained since Sunday school
to respect these figures of authority
more than we respect our selves.
Freedom is tangible
existing well beyond the confines of our mind
in secret meadows and hidden dales
where the air we breathe
does not numb our ability to think
to question the ways of the suit and tie
the badge and gun
the amount of dollars their allegiance earns.
Systemized and categorized according
to the idea of the great spenders
enforcing restriction as debt rises
and like the lambs we are
we walk willingly to the slaughter
as the need for more blood, more sacrifice
demands we suffer
so that they do not.
Banging heads against the wall
the bruises become our own badges.
Signs that WE are the deserters
in this war against the masses.
Dare we cross the lines
That they have placed within our minds?
Dare we take a stand
At the borders of unknown lands?
Where people are free to live together
In harmony and respect for another
Without the poison that has warped our views
And makes us able to disrespect our brother…
Run…run now! The fence is only as high as we believe it to be...
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Banging heads against the wall
the bruises become our own badges....
let's tear those borders down...way too many on this planet..
Banging heads against the wall
the bruises become our own badges.
Love, love, love the last 5 lines!!
Signs that WE are the deserters
a profound statement in your wake-up call from complacency. As overpopulation and resource depletion continue the issue of borders is only going to get bloodier.
This was very thought provoking and full of talent!
~L
That they have placed within our minds?
Dare we take a stand
At the borders of unknown lands? -- that is the crux of it, and what we must each come to terms with as we cross over the land mines of conservatism at least in this country. xxxj
Great opening- like the message- one that I think is very real, particularly today. For me it just reflected a picture of the armed forces not knowing what they are fighting for, not knowing the people they kill, not understanding the preciousness of life- and all the while ordered to do so by someone sat behind a desk. Nice work
Thanks for your fun contribution to last week's Limerick-Off!