Stairway to Heaven ~ Poetics

Today, Brian Miller brings us the fantastic photography of Reena Walkling.  One visit to Missing Moments, and I can pretty much guarantee you'll be hooked! You'll find just one of Reena's pieces below, and the write it inspired, but if your a lover of photography, I urge you to give her a visit.

Tower

Stairway to Heaven

Each stone laid as a testament to our history.
Each, a story, written in the blood of our ancestors
That speaks of victory, of prosperity, of freedom.

But down here in the dirt of the cellar
Chained to the black stone too ugly to show the world
The blue of the sky remains nothing more than memory.

I hear them worship
Despite the many layers of tyranny  that separates us
Paying their tithing with bread from my harvest

Each golden grain was the offered view
During the time spent chained to the whipping post
the green man laughed, but offered no aid.

To the back door of their modern temple I came
as was the practice, for according to the men in robes
gods only heard me if the approach was proper

and at the back door of their temple they waited,
late to the party, I became dispensable
for every seat was taken, every eye filled with fear

I knew, no god waited for me inside
but faith in brother can cause a person to choose unwisely
and I, trusting as I was, believed their god would be there to greet me.

Beyond the bars I can hear the wind whipping
through the meadows, and the green man laughing,
who could be fool enough to believe god could be confined to a house?

Shamed, my body folds in on itself, leaving dignity
chained deep within the black stone walls
and I walk forth, leaving vessel behind

over those green meadows I am free to fly
and now green man laughs with me
wrapped in his laughter, exuberant joy

we light softly on the stairway to heaven.


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Comments

Brian Miller said…
great story telling tash...some nice internal rhyme and flow...i can really sense the disparity too between the persona nd the worshippers above, esp in lines like...

I hear them worship
Despite the many layers of tyranny that separates us
Paying their tithing with bread from my harvest

as odd as it sounds i am glad he found peace in the release from this mortal coil to be able to dance the fields with the green man...nicely done poet
Unknown said…
So passionately, rightly, spoken. Wow, the anger is held in by your masterful verse whose images simply jump off the page! What a wonderful poem, reminding us that religion cannot and must not ever enslave the human spirit. Indeed, your poem itself is testament to that very power. It is what it speaks. For in the writing, the reality comes into being.
Mary said…
Your poem definitely does show another, not so positive, side of religion. There definitely were travesties committed over the years by people who were followers in name only.
Bianca said…
Wow, I love this poem. I see in my own beliefs the negative side towards religion and I think this is why I can identify with it so much.
Laurie Kolp said…
I believe that religion does not a spiritual person make. I really like this, Tash... especially:

who could be fool enough to believe god could be confined to a house?
the contradiction of religion. On one front a peaceful,forgiving, accepting Samaritan the other, a brutal punisher, vengeful, violent. Your poem really brought back imagery of old- religious imagery- Roman imagery perhaps. This piece was a real story, not JUST a poem- more than that- a story steeped in a dark history. Enjoyed it very much. "Each golden grain was the offered view
During the time spent chained to the whipping post"- BOOM- love these lines
S.E.Ingraham said…
Such a powerful poem to go with the cathedral tower ... very nice and I, like Laurie, believe religion does not a spiritual person make ... so many medieval churches in Europe seem to point to a brutal history. Good write.
This is a fabulous write, Natasha. Unbelievably great story, told in a flowing and somewhat mystical voice. Superb!
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Anonymous said…
Moving piece of work, the more I read, the more I respect your talent every time.
Grace said…
A powerful voice on the sad state of our faith...wonderful take on the picture ~
RD said…
I am so glad I stopped by...I chose the same photo and well...I went another direction...

either way it seems, destruction can rain down from above...whether it be physical or spiritual

Peace
Anonymous said…
The green man floating through the piece was so key. There's a "fool-identifier" sitting on my shoulder as well. I'm so glad when we can both laugh at me together. :)
The Silver Fox said…
Kinda sad when the only way to find freedom is to die.

Wow... Blogger's new word verification really sucks. I can hardly read them. Takes me longer to post a comment than it does to read a blog post. :)
Bodhirose said…
A great story, Natasha...especially chilling because of the "gods" that weren't there for him...happy that his soul found release and joy in the end.
Claudia said…
i like this a lot tash...and esp. the...the green man laughed, but offered no aid....summed it up for me...that's the kind of religion no one needs...very nicely penned..great ending as well..
Dave King said…
Superbly told. A simple story, but dark as they come, you have made the most of it to great effect.
hedgewitch said…
Incredible you got that from the picture, Natasha--so rich with so many different strains and yet unified and satisfying as a whole. One of your best, imo, and one of my instant faves from you. Love the green man, love the sense of the lowly chained by those who have given themselves such airs because they have a material vantage that in the end, is not more than ashes and dust. Really fine poem.
Louise said…
I'm amazed at your take on the picture...so imaginative. And yes, there's a big gap between religion & spirituality sometimes...great story poem! In fact, there sounds like a story waiting to be written, in this... :)
Anonymous said…
i'm speechless! this is brilliant, Natasha... i love the story itself and all of the details in your telling make it truly stunning!
t said…
So powerfully stated and well written - I hope you don't mind that I stuck around long enough to enjoy this twice.

No worries, I tithed accordingly.
zongrik said…
i like how you realize no god is waiting for you inside!!
Maude Lynn said…
"for according to the men in robes
gods only heard me if the approach was proper"

Outstanding!
Anonymous said…
This is staggeringly good - a great runaway blend of history and narrative that takes off straight up from the castle turret and takes the reader with them through the dungeons and spires of the blemished history in those walls. Power and faith is always a bad marriage and you've captured that tragedy beautifully.
Spiritseid said…
Sounds like the pain of the victim rose higher than the tower above them. Love the tail. Keep it up
Hot Rod Pics said…
This is wonderful, Natasha, I totally feel this, I love everything about this piece, starting with the form. Very well done! »^.,.^«
ds said…
Wonderful. I love the way you worked in the Green Man as counterpoint to all that is "unbalanced" (shall we say) in organized religion. Of course he is laughing. Thank you.
Unknown said…
A beautiful piece...great concept, imagery and you don't give it away too soon..
Loved it.

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