The Hag of Butcher Hill

Beware the hag of Butcher Hill
 Maria WAS her name 
She lost her love decades ago
 Has never been the same. 

 She likes them young with bodies strong 
and faces pure and fresh
 She finds once dead these are much easier
 to lay across her breast. 

 The boys would laugh when they were warned
 and venture up the hill
 Seems they didn't want to believe 
No matter how much blood was spilled.

 But young Tom Clark was not the same
 had no interest in the dare
 The last he saw of his friend Ralph
 was when he entered there. 

 The house was quaint in looks alone
 and reeked of awful smells 
 in the evening you'd hear her sing
 chanting awful spells  

Low and behold at dawn they'd dance 
Young men silhouetted in shadows grey 
Their bright eyes wide, their minds asleep
 Her song would forever stay

 Within their thoughts like the piper's snakes
 No thoughts of saying no
 Compelled to dance in witch's light 
Knowing where they were to go.

 And dance into her arms they did 
She held them tight and close 
Stealing breath and stealing blood 
of stealing youth, she'd boast. 

 But young Tom Clark resisted well 
Like none Maria had known 
She sent her snakes to eat his brain 
but emptied bellied they returned home. 

 For young Tom knew all too well 
From where her power came 
with his prayers and tokens of faith 
this demon he would tame. 

 In sunlight bright, on seventh day 
he landed at her door 
while she was sleeping off her gorge 
from the night before. 

 Below the bodies, some old, some new 
She slept the sleep of death  
grabbing courage, finding strength
 young Tom took his step 

 The blade was sharp the steel was strong 
Silver forged of myth 
With fierce yell and bold brute force 
Into her form it slipped 

The blood that pooled was oiled black 
the scream would haunt his days 
but he knew within his heart 
no more would the hag. 

 Late that night, he'd raise a glass 
swear the secret would never be spoken  
from his pocket he pulled a reminder, 
Much more than simple token 

One lone finger, one long red nail 
to be buried in sacred earth 
He swore his silence to the sky  
vowed the hag would know no rebirth. 

 Beware the Hag of Butcher Hill 
who walks in shadows, haunts at night 
She seeks the soul of poor Tom Clark 
but any may feel her bite. 

 It's Poetics at dVerse and Claudia Schoenfeld is prompting magic, myth and fairy tales at the pub! Stop on by and share your own, or grab a drink and read the work of some of the best poets penning online!

Comments

Brian Miller said…
oh this is fabulous tash...haha...some really dark and gritty poeming you are going...def has the feel of a wicked fairy tale or legend...the rhyme scheme makes it all the more haunting....well played....well played...
Claudia said…
my...you did spin magic with your magic wand...and a creepy one it is... sending snakes to eat his brain...eewww...glad they didn't manage...fine writ tash and i promise, i'll never set a foot upon butcher hill...
Unknown said…
Tash, you really grabbed the prompt and ran with it. Terrific pacing throughout, love the atmosphere you brought here, reminds me of many of the macabre pieces I've been known to love so much. Even the rhyme, which I always love, but when you started off with the rhyme, yet continuing the tone and story's stage, I wondered how it work, well it worked amazing. Great job. Thanks
Daydreamertoo said…
Ooo... I would not like to meet her on a dark night or...day come to think of it!
Good for Tom for being so brave. Yikes.
Now you KNEW I was going to love this - dark, haunting, blood thirsty, supernatural horrorlicious awesomeness! I'm a massive fan of horror - this just gripped me and gave me some fantastic visuals- i'm actually looking forward to going to sleep- I'm looking forward to the nightmares! Ha ha :)
Scarlet said…
A dark and creepy tale...nice one Tash ~
Anonymous said…
How deftly you spin this tale; in your capable hands it roars and hisses! You really know how to set the mood!
Laurie Kolp said…
Really, Tash... this could be the newest (dark) fairy tale!!
Great rhymng in this awesome write. I really really enjoyed it!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/03/17/the-wolf-and-the-rose-2/
Anonymous said…
Wow, this is some creative tale here.
honestly wish I want to be you or Brian when my creative inner-writer grows up.
Anonymous said…
Creepy good!
Anonymous said…
Haha, a feary tale! Awesome.
Glenn Buttkus said…
luscious, dark, lovely, gripping,
it is so cool that you found the
drama, the soul-connection,
in the midst of hags and haggis,
and kept a rhyme scheme going
as a through line; very creative
take on the dVerse challenge.
Maude Lynn said…
This is fabulous! Love this.
Anonymous said…
"She seeks the soul of poor Tom Clark
but any may feel her bite"

LOL

Nice, Tash.

~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
t said…
That was simply awesome! A damned fun and creepy good read!
Patricia said…
Wow... great read! Yeah for the Tom Clark's of this world. great story, great rhythm... would love to hear you read it!
Ginny Brannan said…
"... And dance into her arms they did
She held them tight and close
Stealing breath and stealing blood
of stealing youth, she'd boast."

A hauntingly dark and evil tale you have woven. Excellent piece, Natasha!
Sherry Blue Sky said…
Whoa! what a tale - ooooh, that one lone finger. Great read!
Anonymous said…
i like how you build up the tension in your story telling


once upon a polar bear
Mark Butkus said…
This is lyrical...magical. A fun read with wonderful meter.

Cheers,

Mark Butkus
Chris Wood said…
Tash! Tash! - woven so wonderfully! You are rockin' & rollin' - so many tasty morsels here to enjoy!

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