Trigger the Shift ~ OpenLinkNight
I have been painted a poser, a painter, a sinner, a saint,
But never when starring down the barrel of gun
whose intent is to wipe my essence from the world.
I have been judged fairly, wrongly, sometimes a bit of
both,
But blood has never spilled as a result
of misunderstanding.
So much I take for granted...
Never having to know the fear that comes
when death marches behind you
or chases you down and calls you threat.
They say when you arm yourself
your ability to perceive threat
is altered...
How could it not be
when you stand invincible
with bullet faster than than feet?
Trigger the safety
Trigger the gun
Trigger the switch
That makes them run.
Innocence stains the pavement red
insatiable blood lust fed
You be the man, you be the man
Now comfort the mother whose son you stole.
Lift up the father whose name dies at your hand.
Light extinguished
Darkness
How will you defend yourself in the shadows
Where your bullet has no eyes to see.
Next time will it be me…
If I should be fool enough to walk toward thee?
No doubt a popular subject for poets and their pens. World...we are better than this. World... we KNOW we are better than this...and as we slowly find the courage to let our voices be heard, the shift will come. It's OpenLinkNight at dVersePoets...and once again they're trusting me with the keys. I'll be swinging the doors wide at 3pmEST. Hope to see you...I've got some making~up to do on that commenting trail Brian reigns over...will this be the week I finally manage to keep up? Guess you'll have to visit to see ;)
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"How will you defend yourself in the shadows Where your bullet has no eyes to see. Next time will it be me…
If I should be fool enough to walk toward thee?"
we live in a crazy crazy world. Just the other day...about 2 hours from where i live- some guy poured acid over a woman pushing a baby in a pram- totally messed up.
Im a big believer in Karma- and as you put it your poem
'Never having to know the fear that comes when death marches behind you or chases you down and calls you threat'
these people will- eventually
Great write tash!
Your poem is an accomplished write on a universal human dilemma, which sadly, sometimes has tragic consequences.
Who is right or wrong remains to be seen. Hatred just breeds more of the same. I hope in young Trayvon's case the truth comes out one way or the other. There seems to be so much injustice about it all. I feel so sorry for his parents and other family and friends.
Painful subject.
I really like the cadence as well.
This world seems to get crazier and crazier, I think we all need to be the change we want to see, and it begins in our own homes, our own backyards.
That being said, I can certainly understand why some people want a gun and they do have the right. I just hope they are prepared to use it AND prepared to feel the consequtences.
Great poem!
Change starts within...
Thank you for sharing and for hosting!
Bravely written with poignant word scenes.
The upside of this unfortunate incident, if there is any, is that we live in an age where news spans the globe in an instant. And when there is worldwide awareness, there can be worldwide outcry. So when we use our voices in this way--as you have done, Tash--it can bring about change.
A timely write that encourages contemplation.
"Trigger the safety
Trigger the gun
Trigger the switch
That makes them run."
~Shawna
rosemarymint.wordpress.com
Great writing.
Love your voice in here, it's so floaty yet the information makes you stop and break the flow in an acceptable way...
I hate guns.
Great work.
Am of the mind that if we "outlaw guns, only outlaws will have guns," but I believe stricter gun control legislation needs to be revised and enforced, and that rules need be applied--stricter background checks, certain training, maybe physiological profiles, that not everyone that wants a firearm should have one.
Very compelling and thought-provoking piece, Tash.
I am a huge fan of your artistry. Love your work.
Do a check on S5 though, I sense a typo.
Nice experience, overall. :)
"Trigger the safety
Trigger the gun
Trigger the switch
That makes them run."
♥