Unlawful Sodomization-Open Mic @RiverJournal1

When talks first started of having an open mic night where we would be linking up audio at The River...I panicked! When I was younger, you couldn't shut me up, but it's been a LONG time since I rock and rolled, so this stuff makes me nervous! No matter...I'm doing it anyway, and I hope you will too! This time, I took one of my NaPoWriMo pieces, busted out my Casio from '92 and managed to pull a beat I could work with...how well, I guess is up to you! Be gentle! And come and join us with your own smooth styling sounds at The Literary Lounge for our first ever Open Mic! Link up with JohnnyK at  Lounge hosted by The River Journal






I've gotten lost within the cement
buried, broken, still bleeding and  bent
below the noise of industrialization
who's iron jaws have swallowed our nation.

This concrete jungle has arms that reach
beyond country pews where pastors preach
below the fathoms of oceans alive
below the mountains where molten earth strives

to reach it's full and smokey potential
the ore of our hearts have become non-consequential
when they only seek souls that are able to bleed
the blood of currency, build demand for the need

to keep the people quiet and calm
while they build weapons and hoard the napalm
that will be used dare we raise our voice
and say "What about us...don't we have a choice?"

Lost between lines of complacency and despair
how low will they take us, before we finally dare
to rise in defiance against the powers that be
that would rather see us wiped out in the name of pure greed?

Start hiding your dollars in old plastic tins
buried in back yards along with our sins
Start taking your dollars back from the banks
to see how quickly they fall in their ranks.

Do not doubt your power, do not doubt your strength
do not doubt your reach to keep them at arm's length.
Do not doubt your brothers, your sisters, their fear
is equal to yours but do they know you are near

to building an army to take it all back
with simple words, a power attack
the courage to say that we matter too
and we refuse to take any more from you.

We are people, unlike your corporation
no matter what status you've conned from the nation.
We matter, we're here and we're willing to stand
to make you account for your raping of man.


Comments

Brian Miller said…
i want to roar just reading this...ugh...we have to do something....else what is our life expectancy? the divide grows ever larger, and all the systems are there just to keep us blind and in order, while they suck the marrow from already tired bones...strong write tash
What a call to action! Yes..we've got to do something. Sometimes it seems overwhelming, but we do have the power. And even the small actions of many add up. Great form...the rhyme is good...helps make this into a chant for change.
Anonymous said…
I think people have to pay much more attention. They don't very much. K.
mrs mediocrity said…
this is fabulous, the form only enhances the strength of your words...

we have to stand up, have to, as brian says, roar.
Unknown said…
Tash, masterfully crafted piece. outstanding message, and this corporation as reality yet as metaphor is terrific, and the title, well, that is a title. Awesome job. Thanks
Lance said…
beautifully delivered fierce message

we need bongos and berets
poetjanstie said…
Behold, Nova Scotia's urbane rapper!
Remove your pens from their scabbards, poets, and wield them in the name of justice..
Anonymous said…
TASH! You threw it down girl; love it! Now write a chorus so I can be your backup singer, uh, please :).
Unknown said…
Tash, this came out great. When you mentioned you were doing an 80's rap, you got me intrigued. Rap is a strong poetic medium. This is great, really flows, taking what worked as an excellent poem to another level. You really brought out the lyrical nature with a natural rhythm. Great job, and I loved the drum beats that accompany the piece. Lots of fun. Thanks
Anonymous said…
I loved it! Great voice and rhythm, you do it well. Where are you playing? gardenlilie
sheila said…
rockin' the beat with an awesome, awesome message! nicely done!

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