Immediate Auscultation

Voices clamor
fighting to be heard.
Words bleed to pages
seeking wings to take flight.

Why are you content to ignore the wolves that nip at your heels?
Why do you choose to turn away when all we hope is you'll listen?

The death of a poet is seldom mourned
Unless, UNLESS
they fought the battle, blazed a trail
and then...THEN
maybe news of their passing
will reach our desperate ears.

The words breathe you know,
and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty.

Why does the void, the nothingness
appeal to you so?
Do you fear old wounds reopened
do you fear new wounds discovered
or is it guilt that keeps you empty?

Forgiveness is found in the words.
Healing is found in the words.
Unity is found in the words.
but love, most of all LOVE
is found in the words.

We long to heal the wounds of the earth
that you have ignored, belittled, scoffed at.
We desire a safe world for our children, their children and theirs.
and YOURS.
If you do not love yourself enough to embrace the words,
we beg of you,
do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul.
Exist in your vapor where is all is black and white,
but do not deny us the color that makes up life.

You can hear our words if you choose,
but dare not try to stop them.

Natasha Head

Comments

Brian Miller said…
do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul...sad///you know when i see poets or artists whose family never support their dream or art....it is up to the poet to stand long enough that one might hear...and then it is worth it, is it not?
Gloria Baker said…
"Forgiveness is found in the words.
Healing is found in the words.
Unity is found in the words."


Love these words Natasha!:)
Anonymous said…
Oh this one was a bit of an arrow to my heart and my stomach... In some cases poets/artists/creatives are deliberately stifled and in other cases I think people genuinely just don't get it. Expression and emotion are not always as highly prized as they should be and it is perceived as dramatics or weakness instead. And sometimes others just don't want or know how to cope with those who are able to express or articulate themselves more colourfully. An artist friend and I debate this a lot, do people really not see what we see, feel what we feel, think about things as deeply? Sadly, no they probably don't, it's much easier to function in this world without empathy... But I'd choose a touch of pain and empathy over emptiness any time. In summary... Great write, loved it! Xx
Claudia said…
i think people tend to ignore or smother things they don't understand...i really think we all have to learn to see the talent in the people around us, trying to understand what's on their heart and support them as much as possible..a fine write tash...really spoke to me
Unknown said…
Extremely strong write Tash. This sentiment can be extrapolated to any are of life. A parent, friend or anyone of influence should never stifle someone's dreams and/or fancy's, they should be supportive and allow whatever may or may not be there to percolate and see where it goes. Powerful stuff here. Thanks
pam prince said…
"and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water" - I like the feeling behind this/of wishing so hard for understanding to be clear. The phrasing is pitched just right.
Maude Lynn said…
Oh, I love this! "Do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart." I won't!
Pat Hatt said…
Finally back to your shore
Been gone forever more
As the cat is a busy bee
But back to visit thee
Sucks when one is brought down
By all making them frown
As the dream almost dies
From all the lies
Wanting them to do crap
Falling in the rat race trap
But one must stand tall
And eventually get out of such a stall
Like a certain place
That I'm sitting at right now I'd like to leave without a trace..haha
Mark Windham said…
tell it girl! Loved this:

'we beg of you,
do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul.
Exist in your vapor where is all is black and white,
but do not deny us the color that makes up life.'
Mark Windham said…
tell it girl! Loved this:

'we beg of you,
do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul.
Exist in your vapor where is all is black and white,
but do not deny us the color that makes up life.'
Beachanny said…
When the seekers seek, then they will hear. In the darkness, poets cry for listeners because so many scream to avoid their inner silence. Wonderful artistic protest, Natasha. The cry of the artist to arc into the land of the deaf and the blind.
Daydreamertoo said…
Much like an artist who is never truly famous until he is dead, so it is with we Poets. (Sadly) Many are struggling, penniless and un-noticed unless they are very lucky and can also forge their own blazing trail but, yes, the pen has always been mightier than the sword. It calls for war and signs for peace and, always (with poets) writes of love or, heartaches.
Lovely write Tash.
Timoteo said…
Another fist pump in solidarity with you, spunky lady. Eye of the tiger!
mrs mediocrity said…
this has such a powerful message. i have to say that i think the internet has really changed the world for poets... all artists, really but to have this outlet for poetry, to have a voice that gets heard, even if only by a few, that's a beautiful thing.

word to the words!
This is another example why I love your poetry. This is gorgeous. You take your time to tell the tale. You don't rush or push it. god forbid the death of poets, their poetic utterances that is. Well done my poetry friend, well done.
Victoria said…
There's a bit of angst, blended with hope in this...at least for me. Too many good lines to point out just one.
Unknown said…
"If you do not love yourself enough to embrace the words,
we beg of you,
do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul." - STELLAR!! so many great lines in here... and loved the part about seldom mourned poets' deaths... so true
Anonymous said…
So many people don't understand the beauty of poetry or art (as art) and are ready to dismiss the artist. You really hot the spot Tash with this one. Well done, fantastic read for me.
Uneven Stephen said…
Valid questions. I LOVE this part so much:

"their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty."
Anonymous said…
the wolves at your heals is a great metataphor!!

radiation rampage
ayala said…
Love these lines...The words breathe you know,
and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty. :) great!
Priyanka said…
Words are beautiful,
words are ugly.
Words can fool you,
for they are limited but many!

:)

Love the confidence this poem has Tashoo!
:)You gotaa gotta visit me soon!
:)
cheers!
Chris said…
Yes! Yes! Yes!
Short poems said…
This is beautiful piece of writing. love it!
Aaron Kent said…
Excellent as usual. I really enjoyed this one, Natasha.You have truely excelled yourself.
Anonymous said…
Sublime! The poet can only verse and hope more than the ether hears them...you capture the reader with such depths, lovely piece! :)
Arron Shilling said…
Your heart and soul pour forth
and a fine example they are too...

your up beat energy -
positive power and drive

give me hope in human nature...

son and daughter - what an example YOU are!...

light
the
way

trail blazer!

:D
Ginny Brannan said…
"The words breathe you know,
and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water"

Ahh Tash, this is excellent from start to finish. The words do breathe, and are as necessary as water to a writer-- a symbiotic relationship that continually feeds and reinforces their very existence. Creativity should never be stifled by those too ignorant to see it.
Shawna said…
I like this:

"their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty"

And I love this:

"do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,
the painter in your son's soul.
Exist in your vapor where is all is black and white"
LilGypsyLaLa said…
Exist in your vapor....love it!Sensational
cloudfactor5 said…
Yes embrace the word !! "do not smother the poet in your daughter's heart,the painter in your son's soul."
Allow the artist to emerge is a powerful message for all parents! Great poem Natasha!
Anonymous said…
A potent, poetic message that I needed to hear today! I'm going to nestle into the warm spot in the sun you create for us poets, a rare and precious gift. Love this like a puppy (ask anyone who really knows me and they will tell you how oceanic this is).
steveroni said…
Oh Natasha, you write so well of human failings to accept those gifts--freely given--of music, poetry, art, and ALL the rest of finer things in life. Above all, LOVE!!!!

I just ran across this:

"A poet in history is 'Divine'. But a poet in the next room is a joke."
--Max Eastman

LOVE and PEACE, from Down South!
Alex Dissing said…
I found myself nodding while reading this. Answers are found in your questions. Nice write, Natasha.
Ginny said…
Preach it! You flesh out the argument, bring it home, all in words that must be heard--words that show the way to "forgiveness" lead the way to "healing," and bring it all together.

Love it!!!
jackie dick said…
The time has come to recognize the poet...and you stopped the clock and made the reader see and listen. There are those who do see and will listen, but not enough. Too often the poet is invisible..unheeded. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem, Tash!
Laura said…
"The words breathe you know,
and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty." ...was aware I was holding my breath as I read this passage, as I sighed in release on the word empty....beautiful poem Tash.
Anonymous said…
Excellent ...write when it boils up until you can't contain the words any longer ... well captured. Have you read Bukowski's poem 'So you want to be a writer'?
Anonymous said…
Hi Tash-- you're right, of course, but one odd thing is that places where poets are censored are often the places they are most revered- I'm thinking Russia during Stalin's times - and the attention of censorship can be stimulating too. I think the biggest tool our culture has against poetry is mass media - entertainment--gaming, nonstop tv, all that distracting mind candy stuff that comes so easily. k.
Becky Sain said…
This is simply amazing Tash. I'm speechless at the words here, the thoughts, the emotions.
Love it -- reading again.
hedgewitch said…
I love the comparison of words to breath and water--truly, they are that essential, I think, to life, to really seeing. As always, your spirit is only equaled by your intense gift of expression, Natasha. Loved it.
Patricia said…
Oh, it was time for this to be said and you said it so beautifully. Love.IT.
James Rainsford said…
An impressive hymn to creativity. Your work is becoming ever more intelligent and authentic. Brilliant write Natasha.
PattiKen said…
I'm reminded of the old Harry Chapin song, "Flowers Are Red, Leaves Are Green." I suspect that few children are born without creativity in their heart. But adults (parents, teachers, etc.) sometimes seem to do their best to squash the creativity. It's a shame. Well said.
Love it! I so hear you...the words. And I dare say there is no stopping your or your words. :-)

My fav part:
"The words breathe you know,
and despite your insistence at ignorance
their breath is no different than water
Seeking pathways
crevices
and all those spaces you fight so fiercely to keep empty."
Anonymous said…
Yes, please never stifle the words of a growing poet. I feel what your saying for our future.
http://leahjlynn.wordpress.com/
You write a great manifesto, and that doesn't keep it from beinga great poem too. To quote Ralph Kramden "Baby, You're the Greatest!"
henry clemmons said…
Your voice keeps geting stronger and bolder; each line more confident. You write like your hitting your stride, your wheel house, your time; the iron is hot. Things must be gettin' right in your neck of Canada.
DQPoetry said…
beautifully and emotionally written Natasha, I love that message of do not smother the poet or the artist. As a guy in my mid-20s the fact I write is not always something I am proud of, most friends don't even know.
But, it is something I am coming to be proud of, it is my outlet, my creativity and a piece like yours just underlines that.
Thanks!
1MereMortal said…
poignantly beautiful

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