The Magic's in the Mystery ~ #OpenLinkNight

Lay down your hate for that you refuse to understand
Your ignorance is the weapon you claim you don't own
in the hands of the layman, easily forgiven
but not in the fields of the harvest we've sown.

Lay down your weapons, these words that you sing
for its not from the heart that you speak
You spread the lies of another, a false mislead brother
who drank of the kool-aid, who fell for the speech

That told him he was some how better than us
because in the end he will be forgiven
washed clean in a river, a misspoken vow
lied through his teeth to get to heaven.

The magic's in the mystery, not in false history
our teachers have feed us the lie
Forced into armies lead by broke side-show carnies
that exchanged our trust for an alibi.

Now they all prosper while we wait to feed
begging for scraps at their table
If we sit quiet like good puppets do
perhaps we'll get to live while we're able.

So we take their words and exist in their lie
hope mixed with blood that we bleed
work fingers to bone, to pay for a home
the food and the clothing we need.

I can no longer sing for my voice has been caged
it seems I have angered their god
I spoke common words, I made common sense
and in this kingdom that's rather odd.

But I still speak against them in whispers and poems
hoping that maybe you'll hear
The magic's in the mystery, not our false history
the time for our chorus is near.

I am shocked and angered at the direction the world has taken.  Good people are hurting all over, and our governments do nothing to lesson the impact.  Our schools, our health care systems, our communities and neighborhoods are suffering tremendously with only small exceptions...call it Occupy or call it common sense, but our systems have reached their peak and are folding in on themselves because we have allowed the control to be passed on to those who have "different" agenda's.  And it doesn't matter what country you call home...the issue is as global as the greed that is taking down the planet. Whoops...I'm ranting...cut to happier news...

The awesome Claudia will be manning or womanning, if you prefer, the pub for OpenLinkNight, and you're all invited! Linking up Tuesday 3pmEST over at dVersePoets...and, if you're interested, my poem "Frozen" from Nothing Left to Lose will be up as Poem of the Day at Poets.org ... how freaking cool is that! ;)

Comments

Unknown said…
Here, Here Tash. Couldn't have said that better. The rant, well, wow, you rant well :) It is disgusting the way things are going. Totally agree with you here. Amazing write. Loving these OLN Previews
Brian Miller said…
that is really freakin cool actually...way to go poet...and i am with you on the words...strong conviction in them...and yours is not the only one asleep at the wheel...but we will vote another one in as if that will change anything you know....our ruling class is so disconnected with reality and we will buy their lies...rock on poet....change, make the change...
Hot Rod Pics said…
I love this and the common sense
it speaks, which in this kingdom today that *is* rather odd! I've spent so much time lately considering the state of dissatisfaction so many of us feel right now. And the most curious aspect to me, is how "both sides" of the political equation are dissatisfied. That doesn't seem possible, some group usually is getting their way and happy. It's like the approaching time in King's _The_Stand_ is what I keep thinking. Anywhose, all that running on by me is really just how much I like your efforts on this theme, and this poem specifically. Well done, Poet!
Anonymous said…
the opening line alone speaks volumes: not what we don't understand, what we REFUSE to understand. Great word choice, great line.
Claudia said…
another fine rant tash...what hit me most was...If we sit quiet like good puppets do... oh we should never...so write on poet!!
Maude Lynn said…
Amen, Natasha! I love this!
Arjan Tupan said…
Never let your voice be caged.
Great poem!
Dawn Pisturino said…
Keep them coming, Natasha!
So we take their words and exist in their lie
hope mixed with blood that we bleed
work fingers to bone, to pay for a home
the food and the clothing we need.

Tash- totally hearing this....its a marathon just to survive sometimes. It amazes me how if you're a hard-working, honest, caring and compassionate human being- you're kind of ignored instead of encouraged. It seems like the whole world has had enough and is starting to wake up...I hope so anyway...but of course (and on the flip side) here's me sat behind my pc ding sweet FA about it...but then again..maybe its our place as poets to WRITE the changes...to inspire, to communicate...just like the common and universal language you speak here.....this is heartfelt, honest and human
Unknown said…
I hear ya Tash... so much truth... won't get any better until people realize ignorance is far from bliss... often the shitty and ignorant are the ones who get rewarded and seem to have the best of everything (to the naked eye, that is.) irritating to say the least... common sense, having your own mind and respecting others is all we need
Beachanny said…
Congrats on Poem of the Day! Awesome and well deserved!!!
Brave you to tackle this subject. Clearly thinking has become muddled, education fails, power corrupts absolutely, and I sense the same as you the world shaking, common sense eroding. We are losing common ground, respect for others, and the ability to compromise. Well said here!!
Beachanny said…
Congrats on Poem of the Day! Awesome and well deserved!!!
Brave you to tackle this subject. Clearly thinking has become muddled, education fails, power corrupts absolutely, and I sense the same as you the world shaking, common sense eroding. We are losing common ground, respect for others, and the ability to compromise. Well said here!!
Laura said…
"I spoke common words, I made common sense" amen, amen, amen!
Congrats again on the poem!

Your words are needed and they are getting out there.

I enjoyed this poem, too. Keep speaking truth to power!
vivinfrance said…
Good for you for ranting - I do too - you are absolutely right, and we are turning into ostriches because the alternative of facing the truth is too painful.
Common sense is the key, and it is so severely lacking. I love your passion in this write, Tash; seems to be bubbling to the surface here of late. Let it loose, m'lady!
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/05/29/dreaming-downhill/
I think you do this so well Tash--give us all voice in the political arena--A powerful voice--you have a gift for this type of powerful write I think---
Alex Dissing said…
"Lay down your hate for that you refuse to understand" ... "I made common sense and in this kingdom that's rather odd." ... A lot of lines stopped me in my tracks, but these two did so most profoundly. There's a lot of truth in this. Your views somehow clarify mine.
Arron Shilling said…
The magic is soooo in the mystery!
pack your bags Tash... all aboard for the Mystery Tour :D
Timoteo said…
You are the "Rantmeister," Natasha.

Forced into armies led by broke side-show carnies.

I made common sense/and in this kingdom that's rather odd.

Just two of the great lines. That thing called political correctness dissuades may from speaking common sense nowadays...glad that it hasn't intimidated you!
Timoteo said…
Above should read: ...dissuades MANY from speaking common sense...
Anonymous said…
You rant on women. at least your using in a creative and productive way.
http://leahjlynn.wordpress.com/
Ginny Brannan said…
Great capture, Tash. I keep wondering when things are going to get better. You've really said a lot in this.
Becky Sain said…
I like it when you get all pissed off... you do it very elegantly.
Nicely done.
mrs mediocrity said…
ooh, you are good... a rant yes, but also a musical poem, and a good rant, a true one...
love these lines:
I can no longer sing for my voice has been caged
it seems I have angered their god
I spoke common words, I made common sense
and in this kingdom that's rather odd.
That is the world we live in.
I share your sentiments -- though I had thought perhaps mine was just an old man's disappointment in the world he has helped to make, mostly by not opposing those who are looting and pillaging an entire planet. Sing us a new world, poets! Maybe it is not too late...
"But I still speak against them in whispers and poems
hoping that maybe you'll hear
The magic's in the mystery, not our false history
the time for our chorus is near."

Great rallying cry! - Mosk
You are surely doing the work of the poet - fomenting discussion, questioning the status quo and turning over rocks to see what scuttles out. Please do keep it up.
steveroni said…
"Oh,Miss...MISS! Not you Ma'am. I am calling my enemies, mis, uhhh:
Mis Management
Mis Judging
Misunderstanding
Mistakes
Misappropriations
Misleading
Misfiring (weapons)
Misanthropes
Misguided...and many more!

WELL-written Natasha, Mistress in the fight against Mysterious Magic and False History.
Love and PEACE!

RANT all you want, Girl. It makes Peeps THINK!
Anonymous said…
ur lucky to live in a place and time where you can speak against them, how many people have not been able to do that through history?

spaceship tanka
Steve King said…
Hi, Natasha
On the day Bob Dylan got the US's highest civilian honor, you happen to post something worthy of the master's power and lyricism. Well imagined and executed.
marousia said…
I have awarded you an Inspiring Blog Award http://marousia.wordpress.com/2012/05/30/inspiring-blog-award/
hedgewitch said…
"I can no longer sing for my voice has been caged
it seems I have angered their god
I spoke common words, I made common sense
and in this kingdom that's rather odd."

Love this Natasha--you hit all the nails on the head here, and couldn't agree with you more.
Anna Montgomery said…
I agree that you have a wonderful gift to crystallize our outrage, lead the charge, and focus our sight. As someone said you clarify our own thoughts, truly amazing.
Pat Hatt said…
You know the cat loves a good rant
As he does many at his plany
And so true too
As greed rules all through and through
It just gets worse every day
As many can't survive at their bay
Yet the rich get richer and such
At some point there has to be a way to say too much
1emeraldicty said…
Tash! You are my favorite ranter...you MUST keep ranting...we need you. Everything you say in this poem is right on. But for me the very first line says it all. Excelsior, poet!
hyperCRYPTICal said…
Excellent Natasha. Your great words speak for many of us.

Anna :o]
Anonymous said…
Hey Tash, I (Vanessa Matthews, OrdinaryLifeLessOrdinay) just nominated you for an Inspiring Blog Award. I will post on my blog explaining the reasons why shortly, but in the mean time there are some rules to follow apparently!

1.Thank the blogger who gave you the award.
2. Tell 7 things about you that have not come up in your blog.
3. Pass this on to 7 other blogs you find inspiring and explain why. Look for a post with my details of why I love you shortly in my blog
a very passionate poem, and i couldn't agree more. i used to be an independant coffee shop owner, until the economy went south, and the banks (the ones i bailed out with my tax dollars) essentially told me that i was "too small to succeed". now i do slave labor in a factory, a subsidiary or a subsidiary, whose parent company, for all i know, is halliburton. i know many others, who like me, lost everything. frankly im ready to plant hammer in someones forehead.

anyway, this poem really speaks to me, very well written
ayala said…
Passionate and well said..great lines!

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