The Second Coming

Among the debris of a lost civilization
mutated survivors
a species no longer known
without home

It is hunters and gathers 2.O
but roles have shifted
for no longer is sex the dominant factor
as the fittest reach the top
of a pyramid where the water
is rumored to be safe to drink

to think...
it would come to this
as horns blossom where
expressions were once more
than need
driven
craving
morals abating

Where the sky now rides below
where day is night
day-glow
24-7
SPF a lost term
now that radio active burn
is the latest trend
minds warp, bend

It is annihilation
fornication
forced and brutal assimilation
as systems engage
and landing gear drops

the dark side of the moon
swallowed whole
in blow-back
thrusters attack
igniting a memory
but for a moment
...not so alien to me.


We're headed out of this world as Charles lights up MeetingThe Bar at dVersePoets with his out of this world prompt.  The perfect time to honor Mr. Bradbury...and perhaps even explore that dark side of the moon before my poem swallows it whole! ;)

Comments

Claudia said…
some people say that water will become more precious than oil one day...scares me..and the picture you paint is scary and maybe yep..not so alien at all...love the pink floyd nod with dark side of the moon as well...
As we enter most uncertain times where in examining our human condition & our fragile Eco environment ~ we see the writing on the wall ~ if you will on the dark side of the moon! Where one day light will refuse to shine for even us!
Unknown said…
Quite the write. Really painted a post-apocalyptic setting well here. Very cool. Thanks
Brian Miller said…
dang poet...you slayed this...oy a gritty future you portend but one that seems all too real...fresh water may be just that...and this has a cormac mccarthy feel...post apocalyptic The Road...scary stuff...written great...
Unknown said…
This really cool, and you've caught the spirit of the prompt as to creating another world, sci-fi style. The alienness of this topic brings to light what might be the achilles of humans, to take for granted so many things hat might disappear and become a fanciful delusion. I don't know whether you've read steam-punk, but from what Inundrstand of it, this has the feel of it. Your ability to delineate the demise if civilization and raise another, alternative world in its place, is anazing.
Dark, but rings true...if we keep heading in the direction we're heading. Good one!
rosemary mint said…
These are my favorites:

"It is hunters and gathers 2.O
but roles have shifted"

"in blow-back
thrusters attack
igniting a memory"
adan said…
scary scary, when / if water becomes that scarce, the brink is already past us...whew!

nice work!
Anonymous said…
Oh dear! You manage to be apocalyptic and personally poetic! But save a drink for me! k.
Dawn Pisturino said…
Such a dark poem, but you captured the fear and despair perfectly.
S.E.Ingraham said…
Here,here - I think you know whereof you prophesy ... water will be the new oil and we will burn in different ways ... a dark but delightful poem that answers the prompt spot on ...

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pam prince said…
Wow, you nailed this prompt ... like the imagery too.
Dave King said…
For me the third stanza is the key to this brilliantly dark poem. Excellently done.
vivinfrance said…
A chilling scenario, I think I should like to bury my head in the sand until it's all over.
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Anonymous said…
I can appreciate everything that the others before me have pointed out, but what really resonates with me is that closing stanza, that sense of sitting amongst the alien and being quite comfortable with it... Not necessarily in a happy go lucky way more in an acceptance of fear, dysfunction and change... Or am I way off track? Probably! Loved it anyway.
Becky Sain said…
I was totally thinking "Mad Max" when reading this.
You did an excellent job here... now I'm scared!
Anonymous said…
i love the thruster attack, cuz i'm an engine person, you know.

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Hot Rod Pics said…
Your always shine so in the role of poet as prophet, your passion translates to the reader so completely. This one is full of neat poetics, too, I especially love "hunters and gathers 2.O," pregnant poignancy, that. Another terrific write, Poet!

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