When Death Comes to Town ~ #OpenLinkNight
You can feel his dark cloak fall
before the bell will toll
You can feel his cutting scythe
as Death begins his stroll
You can smell his rancid breath
Like liquid manure
You can taste his kiss of death
much closer than before
I'm at it again...prepping early for #OpenLinkNight...well...because it's my turn to host the party! Claudia did an awesome job at clean up after last weeks festivities...but better safe than sorry! (Hard lessons...another story!) SO...as I battle a frantic real world, a tween who is graduating to junior high, and a real estate market in chaos...you can bet I'm looking forward to throwing one heck of a party. See you at dVerse, Tuesday 3pmEST...I'll be waiting!
before the bell will toll
You can feel his cutting scythe
as Death begins his stroll
You can smell his rancid breath
Like liquid manure
You can taste his kiss of death
much closer than before
Who knew where Doc Bob met his foe
what road he was travelling down
Who knew when Doc Bob took his stroll
that death had come to town
The flags on limos lining streets
hang limp despite the wind
The Raven sings his crackled call
Signaling the end
Family members line the grave
and kiss the sacred earth
red roses fall upon the box
that will house his soul's rebirth
Who knew why Darla made the call
not having heard a sound
Who knew what told her before us
that death had come to town
She cried real tears or so we thought
His best friend at her side
No one noticed how they embraced
Her husband had just died.
But brother John took in the sights
Knowing all was not real well
He held the secrets in his heart
and swore he'd never tell
Doc Bob had been the better man
Friend Dave could gain no ground
but suddenly he pulled ahead
the day death came to town
In the fancy suburb home
the two would make their nest
becoming all he'd dreamed he be
something closest to the best
With trophy wife and trophy home
Dave knew no friends were needed
He rubbed elbows, drank champagne
while Doc's memory receded
But poor dear Dave had met his match
for karma was no clown
it was only a matter of time
before death came back to town
Darla found him late one day
body limp, no longer breathing
So close to Doc, her heart was broke
no strength for dark and grieving
What took him down no one could say
Brother John just shook his head
he knew before too long the man
was bound to end up dead
Brother John took one red rose
and gently laid it down
Brother John, the one who called
the Reaper back to town.
I'm at it again...prepping early for #OpenLinkNight...well...because it's my turn to host the party! Claudia did an awesome job at clean up after last weeks festivities...but better safe than sorry! (Hard lessons...another story!) SO...as I battle a frantic real world, a tween who is graduating to junior high, and a real estate market in chaos...you can bet I'm looking forward to throwing one heck of a party. See you at dVerse, Tuesday 3pmEST...I'll be waiting!
Comments
Excellent!
this is my kinda poem….a form i'm fond of….hence, I like it a lot.
BTW, give the dark man my ex-wife's address willya?
Anyway, I really loved the story and rhythm of this. It really sounded like a song in my head. Someone should put this to music. Will be a classic.
Really dig the title as well. Wonderfully Western and Clint Eastwood -y.
Happy Tuesday ~
as some of the comments say, very emotional and really has a Western sense feel
I enjoyed reading it as always, and thanks for fostering this great community, I love the weekly catchups!
Hi, I'm Sharonlee, new to the d'verse circle.... I think I posted the wrong link.
http://seasonsandreasons.blogspot.com.au/2012/06/earth-connections.html
Can imagine that Johny Cash would have loved this.
Anna :o]
Psst check your msn email too, as Pat sent something to you.
I loved it. The last 4 stanzas build and build. wonderful, tasha
"The flags on limos lining streets
hang limp despite the wind
The Raven sings his crackled call
Signaling the end
Family members line the grave
and kiss the sacred earth
red roses fall upon the box
that will house his soul's rebirth"
"But poor dear Dave had met his match
for karma was no clown"
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2012/05/28/military-schooling-the-sunday-whirl/