~A Pound of Flesh~

Should one desire a pound of flesh
to balance one's scales of worth
allow me to caution you...

The vessel which houses
you, our eternal beings of light
is proportionally designed
so that shelter from the shadows
can be obtained.

I am left but to question
should that pound of flesh be delivered
at the hands of one who knows not the map
Shelter may well be revoked
based on a technicality found
within the word of the law.

Again, I must caution
should you choose to uphold said word
please do not look down upon this vessel
for the eternal being of light which resides within
learned long ago that "legal" and "moral" are not 
found on the same page, no matter
what hand of god has held office
or bought the pound of flesh
from the rump who happens to reside upon the bench.

To truly balance the scales
there is no need for the delivery of any amount of flesh
simply perhaps
the hand of god who holds present office
should find within himself
the courage to offer to his people
all of his flesh
in the form of new laws
based not on an economy driven agenda
rather
based upon a desire to build a better world

Should the hand of present god
not know within his heart
what is needed 
(ie: compassion, empathy, understanding, love)
then, and only then
should we let our flesh fall upon the steps
of every grand and pompous house of the lord
For it is we
who in our silence
at the hands of our apathy
have allowed the lord his manor.  

We're talking "balance" in poetry today at MeetingTheBar with Victoria Slotto...and while I have taken a more "literal" approach to the prompt, I suspect there's some pretty amazing pieces waiting to be read.  Join us over at dVerse and give your poetic muscles a stretch!

Comments

Uneven Stephen said…
Awesome. I totally thought about making a poem of a visual scale...maybe I still will. Sounds difficult though. I LOVE these lines: "should we let our flesh fall upon the steps of every grand and pompous house of the lord". Great approach to the prompt, Natasha.
Brian Miller said…
legal" and "moral" are not
found on the same page, no matter
what hand of god has held office
or bought the pound of flesh
from the rump who happens to reside upon the bench....nice...love that indictment right there...strong words tonight ma'am...a little tash at her best....smiles....def other zinger lines in this as well....
Victoria said…
Compelling metaphor and indictment of the inequality of our legal systems (read: politicians). I enjoyed your take on the prompt, Tash.
Anna Montgomery said…
Pow! You nailed this one and as usual I leave ready to question, resist, and reconnect.
Laurie Kolp said…
So powerful... I love this, Tash. You go girl!
Claudia said…
love the questions in this..many great lines so i won't start citing...wish there was more balance in our legal systems
Mary said…
Somehow it often seem that the scales of justice are not quite balanced. And I periodically wonder at what cost a pound of flesh is extracted. Thoughtful writing here.
Timely reminder that law, morality and justice are on different shelves...
Anonymous said…
well said as always Natasha
The voice is perfect for this. Love how the emotion is contained in cold legal speak. Keep speaking truth!
chazinator said…
People often forget that really important difference between morality and the law, though try to codify the latter as best they can. I really appreciate the utopianism of your poem, not to mention the way you lampoon legalese. Powerful, as always, indictment of the religious panderers who wish only to support the machine.
Day Dreamer said…
Should one desire a pound of flesh
to balance one's scales of worth
allow me to caution you...

Spiritual, enlightening...I love the way you began and it just flowed... great write!
"Legal and moral are not found on the same page." This is BRILLIANT stuff, Natasha. And the rump that resides on the bench (I'm thinking "the Supremes" here) is also an inspired phrase. Your entire indictment of our current political scene has become the high point of my day, so thanks, hon! Peace, Amy

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