Dark Matter ~ #OpenLinkNight @dVersePoets
Slipstream
particles collide
transference
Realities merge
coupling
sensing the potential
Is this the me you wish to see
Propped up pedestal
trip the switch
Blackness now as you ponder
In the dark there is no sense of my self
which might influence your desire
Shortcut now
space and time need pay no mind
the wormhole trumps their power
Now meek and mild
no more girl gone wild
you knew that taste would sour
Pulsing waves distort my senses
while you decide
where you'll mark your fences
Collar tight, the leash is snug
have you determined
this is love?
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particles collide
transference
Realities merge
coupling
sensing the potential
Is this the me you wish to see
Propped up pedestal
trip the switch
Blackness now as you ponder
In the dark there is no sense of my self
which might influence your desire
Shortcut now
space and time need pay no mind
the wormhole trumps their power
Now meek and mild
no more girl gone wild
you knew that taste would sour
Pulsing waves distort my senses
while you decide
where you'll mark your fences
Collar tight, the leash is snug
have you determined
this is love?
Join us over at dVersePoets as Joy (@Hedge_Witch) steps to the mic to welcome all to OpenLinkNight
Comments
Here in your land
Like the little sc-fi feel
As the feelings became real
And first with my burst
Brian is worst.
The God article: buy the book! :D
Awesomeness Tash!
and congratulations Pat, number one!
Beginning with the Universe (to me...) to the tightness of a collar...from vast freedom narrowed down to ....possession? submission (or hoped for by the one who holds the chain??)
Strong and fierce poem.
Lady Nyo
Is this the me you wish to see
Propped up pedestal
trip the switch
Blackness now as you ponder
I’m such a coward, I’d never tried this.
"Shortcut now
space and time need pay no mind
the wormhole trumps their power"
have you determined
this is love?"
I would say not "love" but definitely control. And not healthy. Have seen at least one young woman get wrapped up in a relationship like this. Definitely not good. Excellent capture, Natasha.
Gene
while you decide
where you'll mark your fences'
I'm pondering these lines...
This is complex and intelligent. I love the scientific references and they way you've linked them to our earthly emotions. Great job. I'll be in touch soon re my photographic piece planned for NWCU. Hope you're well. Hugs, James.
Beautiful expression in verse.