"DYING"
Dying
I saw the raven in the sky
Against the stormy clouds
I thought it odd I heard his wings
Despite it raining loud
I saw a man dressed in black cloak
And thought it all a game
No one would wear that awful thing
No matter all the rain.
The raven kept pace with my walk
And jumped from pole to fence
Goosebumps woke up upon my arms
Despite my common sense.
Night was falling, I was alone
'Least that's what I believed
Until the man appeared again
With raven on his sleeve.
I thought I saw a welcome smile
In the shadows of his hood
I could have turned and ran away
But didn't think I should.
Held fast by his haunting gaze
Blacker than blackest night
Without a word he stole my soul
I had no plans to fight.
Melting in the twilight rain
I let Death have his way
As my essence breathed into him
I was his easy prey.
And on the pavement where I fell
My tears mixed up with rain
I welcomed him with open arms
To wash away my pain
Only Death knew what I wantedļ»æ
I had prayed the night before
And in the morning I awoke
To find his raven at my door.
And in my ear he whispered
We heard your desperate cries
And we have come as you have asked
So with me now you'll fly.
So to this world I bid farewell
I was never one of you
So with Death's raven I will fly
Till I discover life a new.
Natasha Head 2011
The Grim Reaper
By: Funerium
Comments
As they stare at it's face and hear a deep bass.
Fearing what it represents, but that's just my five cents.
Anyway you went all dark and dreary, different from your usual cheery.
I'm a bit weary at you being so eerie.
Maybe the Big Boss Man should come back soon, before you turn into a psycho loon.
Just don't start writing on the walls or running naked down the halls.
If you answer voices that aren't there, you may have to say a prayer.
But I regress, because it would be my guess.
That soon you'll come back to the light and fight the good fight.
A very good read though, it even makes one think in the snow.
Wow this was a long talk, I really like to squawk.
Thanks for the Factinary praise, you deserve a raise.
So have fun selling those homes even if they have nasty garden gnomes.
Death comes in many forms - I'm sure you will be glad when new life springs forth and winter dies.
Thanks for sharing with One Shot
Moonie Smiles
Very powerful depiction of the Death... and your words were very imaginative and true to the style... I loved your words...
'And in my ear he whispered
We heard your desperate cries
And we have come as you have asked
So with me now you'll fly.'
Thanks for sharing...
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Nice One Shot, Natasha!
That's what I'm seeing...
Maria Papadopoulou
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and I see you are from Nova Scotia the land of Sidney Crosby....I am a Penquins fantic and so too of Sidney....blessings...bkm