BLUSH! Poetics with dVersePoets

All I'm going to say, is if you want to know what's up, and what has inspired this write, then you must visit the Poetics party at dVersePoets.  Sheila Moore has brought along Kellie Elmore, and they have presented us a daring prompt indeed...and that's all I'm saying! It's rather Taboo.

Death to the Lady

Have you ever been thrown on
the hood of a Firebird in a
hot July rain?

Have you ever moved your hips
as Freebird resonates
through the back parking lot

of a small town watering hole
where everybody knows your name
think they know your game but

wouldn't they be shocked to see
you here on this car with me, my
skirt riding high, your hands

riding higher, you never
told me you could dance like this
My mama never told me

I could feel like this, because a lady
never does...but we both know
the lady drowned

in a secret bottle of Absolute
and now buttons popped with
you on top, I cry don't stop

...and bid her a fond farewell

Okay...I tried! Dare you to tackle the prompt of Taboo....hit the pub Now! Seems there might be more than Poetry in motion over at dVerse

Comments

Pat Hatt saidā€¦
hahaha oh that was a fun read
No blushing needed at your feed
Okay maybe a little bit
As you took your taboo hit
Jenne' R. Andrews saidā€¦
Fabulous! Love to see you give us the lowdown in this way. xxxj
hedgewitch saidā€¦
Ah, the memories. If I brought up some for you, you have definitely returned the favor--only mine are much more pleasant, I think. This is a very good poem, Natasha--as tight as the narrator after all that Absolut. ;_)
Brian Miller saidā€¦
coldshower...coldshower...icantevengetmy spacebar to work...haha...smoking tash...while we are blushing i got busted at park n ride once in high school...i gotta say....FREEBIRD! my lighter isup tash...ha
tinkwelborn saidā€¦
ahh! young love.
as my age, I'd pay a lady to throw me on the hood of a firebird!!
this was a fun read....reminded me of the vivacity of youth in passion.
I'm thinking of Cat on a Hot Tin Roof here.
Great lines used in catching and moving with the music of heat.
I like this poem...thank you for writing & sharing it.
Oh yea...you broke a few taboos, too....but wasn't it grand!
theborgpoet saidā€¦
Was that you? :) Seriously a great write Tash. You and Hedge have create very visual pieces! Two thumbs up!
Beachanny saidā€¦
This singed and sang! Hot damn, honey. I think you broke through the curtain with this one. Well done!!
Scarlet saidā€¦
Very hot and steamy... i enjoyed this scintillating ride over the hood of Firebird...
Anonymous saidā€¦
You're blushing for the same reason I am but you hit it a bit more straight on than I did :). Well done you taboo buster. I won't tell on you if you don't tell on me.
Sheila saidā€¦
LOL - so that's why you like my photo, entitled "Freebird" - lol. Seriously hot and sexy write and just enough details to gives us the image but not enough to make your momma faint when she reads this (smiles)
Unknown saidā€¦
I love that you pushed yourself here. I tend to get nervous pushing the boundaries, too, but I don't know why. Sex is beautiful, and you made it fun here, too. Maybe we can all stomp on past those lines once and for all. Loved it!
Claudia saidā€¦
haha so good tash...the lady drowned
in a secret bottle of Absolute...enjoyed this dance...smiles
ayala saidā€¦
Hot and steamy !
lynne saidā€¦
Oh Mamma..the things you forgot to tell me..

(they were the good days huh? ha!)

You did awesome here..
Mary saidā€¦
This poem really captures the way it was or the way we wished it to be!
Unknown saidā€¦
LOL when we were young the things we'd like undone thought this was great made me smile thanks for sharing x
Unknown saidā€¦
Tash, what you described should never be considered taboo-ever:) Great read, love the scenes and the way you described them with such a great flow and although vivid, you used a subtle flair, which I find is so much better than simply spelling out every step-allowing the imagination to fill in the unpainted sections. Great job here, great read, thanks
Anonymous saidā€¦
Great read ... images ... now church:)
Arron Shilling saidā€¦
"A secret bottle of absolute" - a line worth getting out of bed for - made my toes curl with poetic pleasure

and yes I have been thrown over a hood or two!

Never a firerbird though maybe a mini (how English)

nice job Tash
Daydreamertoo saidā€¦
Oooo naughty lady! but what fun!
Bryan K. Pounds saidā€¦
Natasha I'm not sure if you intended it or not, but obvioulsy the vodka Absolut is sans the "e" and since you used it, I loved the duality of that line. Gave me a smirk out loud, if you will. Fun read, lady.

-Pounds
Anonymous saidā€¦
Love this--blushing and all!
Sharon Rose Thomas saidā€¦
Very well written. Another smokin' write.
This read very well and smooth. Fast.

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The Silver Fox saidā€¦
Ummm...

Uhhh...

I need a cigarette.
Fireblossom saidā€¦
Well, I never!

Okay, so maybe once. Don't push it!

;-)
S.M. Abeles saidā€¦
Sensational. Love this Tash.
The Silver Fox saidā€¦
Okay, Tasha, you inspired me enough to give it a shot. Check it out...
Timoteo saidā€¦
Uh oh...I think I'm supposed to seek medical help if this thing lasts more than four hours...
Anonymous saidā€¦
"buttons popped with you on top" Wooo! Spicy, and unlike you, I'm not blushing, haha. So nice to see this different side, the taboo of wanton sexuality expressed so playfully, deliciously.
Gene
Anonymous saidā€¦
goods like you have fun writing this piece...
Hope saidā€¦
i'd say you got your point across! :) masterly crafted.
The Silver Fox saidā€¦
Re: Hope's comment... Yeah, I'll say you got your point across! And I'm sure you raised a few... errr... points among your readers, too!

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