Wood Smoke & Maple Leafs

Chasing the sun across the sky
this is the time where leaves will die
turning, burning, in maple red
an extra quilt upon your bed.

The harvest readies what it has grown
among the fields where seeds are sown
darkened skies greet dinner plate
shadows lengthen and seasons race.

The wood stove smolders, the kindling burns
as the season starts to turn
and witches race across the sky
to mark the place where summer died.

Autumn readies for what lies ahead
the pantry's full, our tummies fed
as Old Man Winter starts to climb
upon the back of Father Time.

Mary is prepping the pub as we write for her hosting debut on the dVerse stage. Sending warm waves of welcome and huge PoetLove :) I'll be tied up for most of the evening but look forward to returning to see what my favorite season has prompted from the pens of the Poets who take the stage for Poetics every week

Comments

Mary saidā€¦
Neat to have you write about your favorite season here, Tash. I like the image of Old Man Winter startng to climb upon the back of Father Time....but hope he holds off for a while as we enjoy the fall color and enjoy being wrapped in warm quilts.
Susan Daniels saidā€¦
Tash--my favorite season, too. Love it. Not so crazy about snow, though. It is, as most things are, a tradeoff--suffering through winter to enjoy the fall.
Claudia saidā€¦
ah love all the images...the smoldering wood stove..maple red..the extra quilt..ah i want to cuddle up...smiles
Anonymous saidā€¦
a beautful picturesque poem about autumn, Natasha, and i love the shadow of window depicted in the conclusion. thank you for sharing.
Brian Miller saidā€¦
old man winter climbs on the back of father time....ha i like your closure...nice allusions to the season tash....even the witches...so about this tattoo....smiles.
Anonymous saidā€¦
I sort of like this season too. Wonderful read Tash.
Unknown saidā€¦
I like the simplicity of this one, the images enough to bring the taste of change. Hope you are doing well :)
Daydreamertoo saidā€¦
Lovely write Tash.
I miss our wood stove so much!Love that last stanza. Wish Old man winter could sleep in until late spring though ;)
Sabio Lantz saidā€¦
Keeping with Stevenson's rhyme and form is well done.
The reading is warm and playful. Thank you.
Anonymous saidā€¦
I love the witches racing across the sky :)
Jennifer Wagner saidā€¦
A fun to read piece. I enjoyed how you wove it all together--and your ending is perfect.
Unspoken saidā€¦
Old Man Winter starts to climb
upon the back of Father Time.

LOVE these lines and I want to ride along
Dana Dampier saidā€¦
Makes me want to curl up next to a fire with a blanket! It's awesome.
Unknown saidā€¦
very cool Tash. The middle stanzas are perfect, really capturing so much of what is fall, but in imagery that perhaps is not thought of at first--love the witches, which I never thought of Halloween in regards to fall, but it absolutely is. the food too. Great read.
Anonymous saidā€¦
Tash, l love these simple rhythms and rhyme which are amongst my favourite poetic styles. Your poem conveys all the warmth, coolness, colour and autumnal charm with witches thrown in for good measure! Loved every moment! thanks Tash
this really makes me wish i didn't live in the desert!

great take on the prompt, Natasha!

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Chris Lawrence saidā€¦
You really delved into the season with this, so much great about it i am near lost for words
S and J saidā€¦
'and witches race across the sky
to mark the place where summer died.'

My favourite two lines - great poetry
Anonymous saidā€¦
A dead summer and witches in the sky- bring on Halloween - my FAVE time of year...great form in this Tash- and that gave it a sense of trafition- which again links to the traditions of Autumn and all the deep cultural ceremonies that take place at ths time
Beachanny saidā€¦
These could be song lyrics. Caught all the magic in the change to the passion and flame of autumn..the blaze before the end! Loved it.
vivinfrance saidā€¦
This poem moves at quite a lick - I hope the season slows down a bit! Lovely rhythmic piece of writing.
Maude Lynn saidā€¦
I adore that last stanza! Great write!
ds saidā€¦
"...witches race across the sky
to mark the place where summer died."
I like that; can't say why. Old Man Winter climbing on Autumn's back is a wonderful image. Great stuff. Thank you.
Paulog30 saidā€¦
Grear flow, loved the images presented for the season.
Kathy Reed saidā€¦
I like the maple red...nice job!
Buddah Moskowitz saidā€¦
I love when verse is done well. This painted a picture that I wanted to climb into! Loved it.

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