Up to her Ankles ~ #Poetics @dVersePoets

You could taste the metal in the air. Her, ankle deep and wading
through every ounce of life that ever dared try to steal her own.

It was a dark November sky that screamed for color.
Dull, lifeless...like the very beings who had tried for so long

to tell her she was just like them.

The carousel spinning, her arms tired
snap back recoil
and still the music played

pan flutes and forgotten carnival vendors
no eyes left to see

as one rogue red balloon
delivered her message to the world.

and she falls to her knees
for once, accepting of her fate


Today's prompt and art have both been provided by Kelvin, who takes the stage at Poetics today for the very first time. Let's show him the love and deliver a poem...time to play pen-wielders!

Comments

Brian Miller saidā€¦
hopefully not all is lost to her...we need those colors in this world...those red balloons that bring hope and color to an otherwise drab world...sometimes you have to get off the merry go round though, not matter how enchanting the music...smiles.
Ben Ditty saidā€¦
Absolutely mesmerizing.
kelvin s.m. saidā€¦
...i fell to your use of metal in the air... really good Tash... and the appearing of Pan brought forth too sad & betrayed image... acceptance of fate is rather the only choice i can sense from her... but no... her soul will fly with that balloon...and will bring the only hope that can change her fate.... smiles...great lines of sadness...you really set the mood here... enjoyed it...
Mary saidā€¦
She may be on her knees, resigned; but her message will be known to the world. Enjoyed your creative take.
Sabio Lantz saidā€¦
brrrrr a Winter Carnival -- resignation and fading.
Alas.
Unknown saidā€¦
Imagery is breathtaking but it comes as no surprise. Natasha you put my words to shame haha. Amazing everytime!
Wolfsrosebud saidā€¦
do like the pull from her knees to the sky... like a release of inner pain/depression floating away... almost freeing
Anonymous saidā€¦
loved the rogue red balloon - her words escaping - such a bright spot of hope - K
Anonymous saidā€¦
Hoping for the best. An excellent use of the balloon and its color.
DandKblog saidā€¦
Very philosophical I love this. Cheers!
JayG saidā€¦
Even "with no eyes left to see" she got her message out - most importantly, for her to see.
Anonymous saidā€¦
And her message drifts away for all to see...that's a little bit of hope!
Kathy Reed saidā€¦
Original and smartly written ;)
brudberg saidā€¦
A you have captured a feeling that talks deeply to me. I love it how you use the palette to capture the feelings.
Claudia saidā€¦
very cool tash...love the imagery and the hope in this..sometimes the small signs mean the world in situations like this
lucychili saidā€¦
it sounds like zombie survival
hopefully someone sees the balloon
Anonymous saidā€¦
Very alternative take on this - intriguing!
Anonymous saidā€¦
Damned good - not sure if I got the tune right, but I swear I could hear the music playing
Anonymous saidā€¦
Chilling and desperately sad - at least for me. I truly hope that the balloon doesn't really carry her final words.
Linda Rogers saidā€¦
Beautifully sad words. Your poem evokes deep emotion. Nice work.

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