Diamond Ashtrays~OneshotWednesday
This week has seen me discussing music, tunes, and performing with a wide variety of friends. In honor of those conversations, I am taking a big leap with you all, and sharing a song I wrote. Nothing fancy, but a different sort of OneshotWednesday for me. And, I still get to rhyme! :) Link up with us at Onestoppoetry, and share your dreams with us!
Diamond Ashtrays
Bloodshot eyes and a cigarette smile
Dressed up in diamonds not her own
She once dreamed she'd live this life for a while
Knowing it would never be hers to own.
The kitchen still reeks of last evenings events
Flicked beer caps litter her floors
Ashtrays and Styrofoam, no champagne flutes
And someone put a fist through her door.
Dave Wilcox set on shuffle, still floating along
She steps over the bodies that she doesn't know
She fills coffee pot, popping Advil nonstop
Cause she feels like her heads gonna blow.
Bloodshot eyes and a cigarette smile
Dreaming of mansions on hills
The A-list has never much been her style
But she's always a chaser of thrills
The bodies now moving, they start to wake up
But she's not feeling like much of a host
Cheap whiskey cologne, a wife they won't phone
She just wants them all out of her house.
Bloodshot eyes and a cigarette smile
Dressed up in diamonds not her own
This raging redneck wanted to dance for a while
In the dream of a life she can't own.
Comments
Very well done. You painted a fabulous picture. I could almost smell the 'hungover morning'!
Great Job!
Sammy
Feels like one woke up in hell
The lyrics really are well done
And just add depth to the fun
A mansion would be nice too
But it be a bit much between me and you
So soon you have to use a lung
And show us all how it's sung..lol
hugs
This stanza really hit home - brough me back to my wild teenage years :) - The kitchen still reeks of last evenings events
Flicked beer caps litter her floors
Ashtrays and Styrofoam, no champagne flutes
And someone put a fist through her door
I am so glad you took a chance; had the courage to put this out here for us to enjoy!
Luke @ WordSalad