BLUSH! Poetics with dVersePoets
All I'm going to say, is if you want to know what's up, and what has inspired this write, then you must visit the Poetics party at dVersePoets. Sheila Moore has brought along Kellie Elmore, and they have presented us a daring prompt indeed...and that's all I'm saying! It's rather Taboo.
Death to the Lady
Have you ever been thrown on
the hood of a Firebird in a
hot July rain?
Have you ever moved your hips
as Freebird resonates
through the back parking lot
of a small town watering hole
where everybody knows your name
think they know your game but
wouldn't they be shocked to see
you here on this car with me, my
skirt riding high, your hands
riding higher, you never
told me you could dance like this
My mama never told me
I could feel like this, because a lady
never does...but we both know
the lady drowned
in a secret bottle of Absolute
and now buttons popped with
you on top, I cry don't stop
...and bid her a fond farewell
Okay...I tried! Dare you to tackle the prompt of Taboo....hit the pub Now! Seems there might be more than Poetry in motion over at dVerse
Death to the Lady
Have you ever been thrown on
the hood of a Firebird in a
hot July rain?
Have you ever moved your hips
as Freebird resonates
through the back parking lot
of a small town watering hole
where everybody knows your name
think they know your game but
wouldn't they be shocked to see
you here on this car with me, my
skirt riding high, your hands
riding higher, you never
told me you could dance like this
My mama never told me
I could feel like this, because a lady
never does...but we both know
the lady drowned
in a secret bottle of Absolute
and now buttons popped with
you on top, I cry don't stop
...and bid her a fond farewell
Okay...I tried! Dare you to tackle the prompt of Taboo....hit the pub Now! Seems there might be more than Poetry in motion over at dVerse
Comments
No blushing needed at your feed
Okay maybe a little bit
As you took your taboo hit
as my age, I'd pay a lady to throw me on the hood of a firebird!!
this was a fun read....reminded me of the vivacity of youth in passion.
I'm thinking of Cat on a Hot Tin Roof here.
Great lines used in catching and moving with the music of heat.
I like this poem...thank you for writing & sharing it.
Oh yea...you broke a few taboos, too....but wasn't it grand!
in a secret bottle of Absolute...enjoyed this dance...smiles
(they were the good days huh? ha!)
You did awesome here..
and yes I have been thrown over a hood or two!
Never a firerbird though maybe a mini (how English)
nice job Tash
-Pounds
This read very well and smooth. Fast.
http://seeworldhere.wordpress.com/2011/10/16/our-world-today-they-know/
Uhhh...
I need a cigarette.
Okay, so maybe once. Don't push it!
;-)
Gene
Anna :o]