FormForAll ~dVersePoets~Haiku
The Wheel of the Maritimes
Change, cycles emerge
rhyme and reason know no place
the mighty sea reigns
From the white blanket
worn so land may find slumber
recharging, fertile
when rains of April
awakens earth to planting
greenery takes hold
until dry, barren
heat of the highest sun bakes
seeds planted erupt
Shorter days harvest
summers sustenance is held
survival blanket
Today Gay (aka @beachanny) is treating us to the form of Haiku & Senryu over at the dVersePub. Come and play poet with us won't you, as we take a look at Japanese poetry. I have choosen to present my own in the 5.7.5 syllable count of Senryu...and if you want to know more, you'll have to talk to Gay! ;)
Comments
i like the long paragraph, how it moves, and i like that there are no periods.
Beth
your words leave traces for us to follow.
;)
Stunning imagery carried throughout, peaceful to each season, yet prolific by their combination.
My share is here: http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2011/10/thoughts.html
Gene
Cheers
Hank
Well written, and they all stand.