Addicted ~ OpenLinkNight 21 ~ dVersePoets
Addicted
It called to me from dust and debris
an ancient forgotten, dog eared copy
a whole new world would open for me
altering future, reality.
The worlds he weaved were pure and true
lands of red and trees of blue
Where red rum would soon become
Murder in a hotel room
From the valley sweet this dark world treat
would alter where my pen would meet
the crinkled page in ink filled rage
to fill with words became the feat
This shiny thing that caught my eye
would be the words where crayons died
where I grew to what I do
upon the page where fiction lies
So the words began to run
and child hood slowly came undone
where I grew the words did too
I consider this a battle won
But how does one truly free their pen
to write of death, of lust of sin
Unleash the beast, a tribal feast
A sacrifice to gods of men.
It called to me from dust and debris
This ancient and forgotten weave
Where the words are the only way
In their blood my soul is saved.
Hey Poets! It's OpenLinkNight and I get to throw the party! Doors open at dVersePoets at 3pmEST. Also, my dearest friends...if you're interested....we're doing a survey over at The River Journal. We want to know how your family hinders or helps your own word addiction. We're dedicating an issue to the trials and tribulations many of us face along our journey, and would love to get your thoughts. Feel free to drop me a line if you've a story or an experience you'd like to share.
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did the survey as well...
looking forward to seeing you behind the bar tonight tash...
It called to me from dust and debris
This ancient and forgotten weave
Where the words are the only way
In their blood my soul is saved.
Just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But how does one truly free their pen
to write of death, of lust of sin
Unleash the beast, a tribal feast
A sacrifice to gods of men.
It called to me from dust and debris
This ancient and forgotten weave
Where the words are the only way
In their blood my soul is saved.
to write of death, of lust of sin
Unleash the beast, a tribal feast
A sacrifice to gods of men."
Was always the movie, I'm just that guy
But the more I go
The more the books do show
Never really knew I had such a thing
Until I gave the rhyming a ring
Another wonderful write from you
And that is just the face it facts tashtoo
{i live alone so i'm going to skip the survey.}
happy holidays! ♥
the words are important...the release = the reward...for so many, they cannot...thank you
Peace
believe it or not i (someone resembling me) once injected something named RedRum - thankfully a V long time ago (unless i'm still in the foggy haze imagining this hahah)
a bad drug - a great reference - an awesome book movie.
love the shape of this tash and the form suits the content aa fine duality.
Super Duper Dude
a whole new world would open for me
altering future, reality."
I have dived into alternate worlds so many times between the pages of a book.
You can. You never fail.
But how does one truly free their pen
to write of death, of lust of sin
Unleash the beast, a tribal feast
A sacrifice to gods of men.
Hank
I caught that reference to The Shining...one of my favorite movies!
Especially:
I grew to what I do
upon the page where fiction lies
Fiction always lies, of course. And in so doing tells a greater truth...
Also, I stopped by to thank you for your fun contribution to this week's Limerick-Off. I hope you'll be a frequent participant. (I post a new Limerick-Off every Sunday/Monday/)
Thanks again!
Cheers,
Mark
one at home with this addiction.
nice allusions (I see Steven King in there).
nice roll of catharsis.
great poem!
beautiful and true poem, Natasha.
Lady Nyo
"Where red rum would soon become
Murder in a hotel room"
http://iamthat-shawna.blogspot.com/2011/12/cremation.html
and child hood slowly came undone
where I grew the words did too
I consider this a battle won
The subject is really interesting, loss of innocence as a process of gaining language. The weave of the paper and the blood you write with. There's a lot packed into the images and I wonder whether all the threads are woven as clearly as thwy might be.
This has some very sharp images and the turns of phrase really make me jealous. I like the rhymes you've chosen and they do not seem forced. I do have one nitty pick, "valley sweet," I think, sounds just as good switching the adjective, "sweet valley."
I enjoyed it very much.. the thoughts are so heartfelt and engrossing... I loved your lines...
'So the words began to run
and child hood slowly came undone
where I grew the words did too
I consider this a battle won'
Thank you for sharing...
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/12/whispers-buddha-song.html
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But how does one truly free their pen
to write of death, of lust of sin
Unleash the beast, a tribal feast
A sacrifice to gods of men.
This ancient and forgotten weave
Where the words are the only way
In their blood my soul is saved.
to me, your words sound abstract and full of dust and lust ...
A fundamental topic poetically and wittily represented.
Cheers.
Wonderful Job.
Love it!