Heart Song ~ FormForAll @dVersePoets

Heart ~ Song

To trade a poem for a song
will carry you when nights are long
will comfort you through lonely dreams
remind you of the days now gone

To trade a song for words of hate
will lead you towards a darker fate
for karma swings both forth and back
will scales of justice bear the weight?

To trade a sword for simple pen
will show how simple words can win
no blood spilled, no souls are lost
when ink runs low just fill again

To pen the poem that rights the wrong
to find the courage when night grows long
to know that this is where you belong
armed with pen, your heart's true song.

Though time still remains frightfully short for me, there was no way I was going to miss two FormForAll's in a row. This week sees Samuel Peralta tending bar at dVersePoets with an amazing article on the form known is Rubaiyat Quatrain. I'd tell you more...but then you wouldn't have to visit! Swing on by the pub and get your poetry fix...trust me...you'll be glad you did!

Comments

A wonderful work of art, by a wonderful poet. Love it! ♥
Brian Miller said…
nice...love the turn back at the end to the beginning...you took us through quite the cycle in this tash...and i think i am finally finding my inspiration to give it a try in the morrow...
Anonymous said…
this is so nice. each stanza has so much truth and honesty to it.

i like the end because it reminds me of the story Yemeni poet gets tongue cut for telling the truth.

i also like S2 which says "what goes around comes around"

care for those age’d until the end
henry clemmons said…
Very kool. I sang it the second time through. You have such a natural rythm, I love it when you use it. Great job.
Semaphore said…
A wonderful lyric! - you made the form yours in this composition. I especially like the way you take the first lines and rearrange them in each stanza to make them state a new - but consistent - thesis every time, building up to the summation in the final stanza.
Anonymous said…
"when ink runs low just fill again" ... That is easier said than done on some days.

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Anonymous said…
I totally get this, so well done and completely true. You go women, #respect
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Love it so much, I have been reading it over and over, 'hearing' the music.
Claudia said…
nice tash...trading poems for songs and swords for pens...if only more people would do this...and you have a beautiful flow in your quatrains..
Grace said…
I specially like the last stanza..love your voice ~

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Wolfsrosebud said…
... the pen can bring truth... I like that... great flow to the piece
Chris Wood said…
Tash ~ a very lyrical flow and so beautiful to hear you sing such truths!
A lyrical reflection on the truths of writing
Anonymous said…
Succinct and eloquent. This strikes me as a poem for the road, whether that be a road for walking or driving or just the road that all creative types take. These essential truths are a singing medicine for that journey!
Beachanny said…
This is truly lyric poetry--in construction, in form, in meaning, and in execution. Just wonderfully written. Easily could be set to music--already in my ears. Brilliant use of the form!
To pen the poem that rights the wrong
to find the courage when night grows long
to know that this is where you belong
armed with pen, your heart's true song.

This is for all the poets of the world- love this Tash - especially this last stanza- 'to find the courage when nights grow long' - I really need to remember this...
Anonymous said…
Tash, this poem has a great flow to it and a beautiful rhythm, trye to form! I particularly like "To pen the poem that rights the wrong" we all want to change the world with poetry
James Rainsford said…
Great response to the Quatrain challenge Natasha. A very accomplished write.

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