The Drum

It is constant
the beating
of bone against skin
stretched over a civilization

work, pain, work, gain, work, pain, the same, the same

because we know no privilege
save for the exception
of a legacy passed on
by others
who were charged with carrying the drum

work, pain, work, gain, work, pain, the same, the same

But the magician has grown smarter
as our dissent grows
a generation of minds waking up
despite a system provided
to ingrain the same

and so beautiful baubles dance
convincing us
ours can be a life
without want, without worry
as our bones turn to plastic
and the skin of the drum goes digital

work, spend, work, spend, rewards, rewards, rewards

you will never hold clear title to
but, for perhaps a moment
you can buy time with a silver spoon
and afford to tip
the minimum wage server so that he or she
can pick up a quart of milk on their way home
pretending
this is how it was supposed to be.

work, pain, work, gain, work, pain, the same, the same

our bones ache in sympathy
as the plastic entombs
and the skin evaporates
offering no bouncing back
this time

and we are left
to chase an echo
never thinking
we might be able to control
how tight the skin is stretched.

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Comments

Pat Hatt said…
Wow there you go
Quite the beat you let flow
As on and on we do seem to be
The same old same old at each sea
But there could be more
Should we attempt to explore
Brian Miller said…
what suckers we are...the drum beat and we follow along like its the pied piper...and you know good and well that once the white house changes over here they will start a war, because it will fix the economy...its how they did it the last time and we will praise them as they beat that drum...and we will be happy as our children die to spend again...you are riling me up on a really bad day...the auditors are killing me slowly in a 1000 cuts to give the president talking points...
Louise said…
Terrific poetry, Tash...keep beating that drum...things have to change!
This hurts.
What are we going to do about it?
Beachanny said…
I get the feel of Vachel Lindsay here. He wrote his own kind of protest for his times, too, (living in Springfield the hometown of Lincoln). All on the barrel of a drum! Yes, very effective rhythms, words, meaning defining a new shading of "class" subverted by those who would subjugate us. Wonderful poem, Tash!
Very nicely done! Love that refrain you used in this, a very effective technique...
Jessica Kristie said…
I feel this... wow do I feel it. Beautiful Tash. ♥
Well said!! But I feel for my kids--the ones who will have little illusion left--or maybe that is a good thing--
Daydreamertoo said…
We stopped being human when everyone started worshiping money as the new God. The rich get richer and they don't care about the poor. As long as they are untouched in their mansions the rest can fight dog eat dog and, instead of living we survive the rat race (if we're lucky) with just enough to get by.
I've never wanted to be rich, I think sometimes they are some of the most unhappy people going. It would be nice to be comfortably off. Enough to pay the bills and a bit left over for a treat now and then.
Nice one Tash.
You hit the nail on the head, Tash. Thise who toil are patted on the head and cooed at so that they will be satisfied with their lot in this mad machine.
Excellent write!
Linda Kruschke said…
This has a nice flow to it - and is a harsh reminder that we a losing a life of contentment as we "work, spend, work, spend" but there never is a reward as long as we believe that is what will make us happy. Peace, Linda
hedgewitch said…
Truer than true, Tash. I know for most of humanity it's always been this way, but I think we're at a creative crisis point in western civilization--we have to reinvent ourselves or the plastic will conquer all. And that's what poet's like you, and poems like this, are all about.
vivinfrance said…
I remember when life was like that. You paint the humdrum existence painfully clearly! The greed society is another ball game and must be resisted!
jackiedick said…
this is great in so many ways...cuz it tell the truth in red white and blue...and God, how I don't want to march to this drummer but I do...I think we all do to some extent. When does it stop. Love this work of yours...you drum up awareness...and so very effectively. This has got to be one of my favorites from you!
'bone against skin stretched over civilization' ~ ~ the power of time & legacy! A powerful poem!! WOW ~ superbly done ~ weaves with metaphors of skin & bone ~ poverty of want & poverty of need! The rail against such an unjust system ~ live these words ~ 'our bones turn to plastic' and endless need. Trickle down voodoo economics from the super rich to the rest! ~ now I'm just wanting OCCUPY to succeed! :)
pam prince said…
Wow - an excellent write. Loved the beat and so cleverly written. Pam

http://swansongsandprose.blogspot.co.uk/2012/05/gust-of-heather.html
marousia said…
Maybe one day we shall wake up and stop following - fabulous poem
Alex Dissing said…
"work, pain, work, gain, work, pain, the same, the same" ... the repitition sure helped, but it was the truth in this that made it memorable for me. It's good to be patriotic, but only if the support is deserved. Idk if that's what you were inferring, but I went off on that tangeant today & this reminded me of it. I liked this a lot, Natasha.
Anonymous said…
The first stanza is spectacular! Enjoyed the poem a lot.
Anonymous said…
chasing the echo...strong work again, powerful
mrs mediocrity said…
I hear it, that drum beat... and we all march on and on...

my mom used to always say we all march to the beat of a different drummer, these days it all feels the same, the same...

great write!
theborgpoet said…
Unfortunately, it is a generation of minds waking up to another hypnotist.
ayala said…
True!! Well said!!
Timoteo said…
The ending strikes a hopeful note. The people hold the true power, but we've long forgotten that little detail. We are many, they are few. They only govern by our consent--as demonstrated in the middle-east. But we've delegated it to the liars, the charlatans, and the con men, because it's too much trouble to get involved.
Wander said…
Very good poem!

Wander
Anonymous said…
Agree with Mrs. Mediocrity! Great repetitions here. k.
Semaphore said…
This one has the rhythms of Langston Hughes, and urban beat that reverberates against the taut skin of civilization's drum.
Steve King said…
There's always someone ready to beat a drum for others to follow...A direct and visceral composition, thoughtful and well done. I enjoyed it much.
LilGypsyLaLa said…
As always I learned a lot...I feel the truth in all of this...life and all it's splendor stretched for everyone...always scrimping...fighting sometimes just to survive.Nice piece!
Kevin said…
Very nicely done and evocative. I hope the conversation about the linguistic tie between poetry and fishing went well :)
Anonymous said…
Urghhh.....can't tell you how much I'm feeling this at the moment...perfect for my mood....the drum beat goes on and on and on....this speaks to me about the relentlessness of work, the drumbeat of the workhouse, producing nothing but goods for the money machine to churn out to make dollars whilst we are thrown crumbs from the table....this talks to me about missing the point....life spent drumming that same beat....over and over....I love the chorus in this...Work,Pain, The Same, The Same
Anonymous said…
A fantastic rhythm and campaigning feel to this, make people sit up and listen... hoorah!
A touching, brilliant piece, Tash darling. ♥
chris said…
Wow, so much going on in this poem. Those last three lines are the clincher. We can make a change--why is it so many of us don't know that? The magician grows smarter; we can too.

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