Haiku for Onestop...

Pristine innocence
Hiding flaws amongst her limbs
Blanket of rebirth


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Anonymous saidā€¦
Loved the perceptive depth you added to this haiku. Feels sad :( great choice of photo too!
January 10, 2011 at 4:57ā€ÆPM
moondustwriter saidā€¦
Great feeling to this haiku
realism and symbolism - excellent piece as well as photo
January 10, 2011 at 5:26ā€ÆPM
Anonymous saidā€¦
I like IT.
January 10, 2011 at 5:27ā€ÆPM
Beachanny saidā€¦
A renaissance poem in its essence! Well done, Gay @beachanny
January 10, 2011 at 6:59ā€ÆPM
Deepika Vasudeva saidā€¦
the serene touch and the evocative breathe.. amazing
January 11, 2011 at 6:24ā€ÆAM
Kodjo Deynoo saidā€¦
Blanket of rebirth, I like that line
January 11, 2011 at 8:31ā€ÆAM
Anonymous saidā€¦
Definitely thought provoking. 'hiding flaws' and 'rebirth'. I see so much here. Well done.
January 12, 2011 at 3:57ā€ÆPM
Shashidhar Sharma saidā€¦
Dear Natasha

Perfect one haiku and the perfect image... it has the essence of life and living... beautiful.


Shashi
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January 13, 2011 at 7:13ā€ÆAM
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