Haiku for Onestop...

Pristine innocence
Hiding flaws amongst her limbs
Blanket of rebirth


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Anonymous said…
Loved the perceptive depth you added to this haiku. Feels sad :( great choice of photo too!
January 10, 2011 at 4:57 PM
moondustwriter said…
Great feeling to this haiku
realism and symbolism - excellent piece as well as photo
January 10, 2011 at 5:26 PM
Anonymous said…
I like IT.
January 10, 2011 at 5:27 PM
Beachanny said…
A renaissance poem in its essence! Well done, Gay @beachanny
January 10, 2011 at 6:59 PM
Deepika Vasudeva said…
the serene touch and the evocative breathe.. amazing
January 11, 2011 at 6:24 AM
Kodjo Deynoo said…
Blanket of rebirth, I like that line
January 11, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Anonymous said…
Definitely thought provoking. 'hiding flaws' and 'rebirth'. I see so much here. Well done.
January 12, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Shashidhar Sharma said…
Dear Natasha

Perfect one haiku and the perfect image... it has the essence of life and living... beautiful.


Shashi
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January 13, 2011 at 7:13 AM
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